Thursday, April 06, 2006

kuchh zindagi..

Sapno ke mahal banaati hun,
tootne par jinke, haqeeqat mein,
main, ji bhar ke roti hun.


7 Comments:

Blogger rachna said...

Hi...
You sound pretty sad in your poem...but have put what you wanted to say beautifully into words...

7/4/06 00:55  
Anonymous Rishi said...

Sapno ka to kaam hai ban ke bikharna tu kyon uspar Roti hai...
dil ke kuch gumoon ko is tarah kyo dohti hai....

7/4/06 16:40  
Blogger Nutan said...

@Rachna
It's not that great, I guess. Have some of the good ones in my archive.

@Rishi
Dekh mere compositions ka asar, tu bhi shayar ho gaya(bura hi sahi :P).

8/4/06 06:40  
Blogger Ash said...

I'm not much of a shayar but you write well :)

8/4/06 07:26  
Anonymous Rishi said...

Abey kabhi to taarif kar diya kar...

8/4/06 12:46  
Blogger Nutan said...

@Rishi
Wah-wah, kya baat hai!! You are the best! :P

10/4/06 00:37  
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3/8/06 09:07  

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