Tuesday, April 18, 2006

sawal..

Aaj uthi jo ye lehar,
toh pata nahin saagar kahan hai?

Agar dekha nahin use,
toh jo dekhegi wo nazar kaun hai?

Samajh sako toh samajh lo,
warna puchhungi hua kya hai?

Sun sako jo ye beqaraari,
toh kaho aakhir kyon hai?

Aaj agar hum tanha hain,
toh aanewaali wo bahaar kab hai?



11 Comments:

Blogger Arvind Rishi said...

Great way to put this big Question...

19/4/06 14:49  
Blogger Nutan said...

Hmmm..

20/4/06 00:03  
Blogger Cruel Intentions said...

Muddat Ho Gayi Un Tanhaiyon Ko Guzre,
Fir Ab Bhi In Aankho Mein Woh Khamoshi Kyun Hai?
Tod Diya Yakin Mohabbat Par Se Jisne Mera,
Woh Shakhs Ab Bhi Pyar Ke Kaabil Kyun Hai?
Chun Chun Kar Jiski Yaadon Ko Apne Jivan Se Nikala Maine,
Woh Ab Bhi Mere Din Raat Mein Shamil Kyun Hai?
Yaad Na Aayi Mujhe Chahat Jiski,
Mere Dil Par Ab Bhi Uski Hukumat Kyun Hai?
Khatam Ho Gaya Jo Rishta,
Woh Aaj Bhi Saans Le Raha Hai;
Mere Vartamaan Mein Jeevit,
Woh Ab Bhi Shamil Kyun Hai?

21/4/06 09:50  
Blogger Nutan said...

Wow..what a nice comment! Better than the original composition indeed.

21/4/06 11:25  
Blogger unforgiven said...

You know, I really should've read these fully earlier. Hindi na, thoda sa haath tight hai :p


Aaj jab padh rahaa hun to sirf ek hi cheez reh gayi hai kehne ho..

"Kya baat hai!"


Waiting for your next set of poems eagerly :)

21/4/06 18:00  
Blogger Cruel Intentions said...

Swaal hai... Jawaab to dena he padega

22/4/06 01:32  
Blogger Cruel Intentions said...

Kaasid Ke Aate Aate,
Khat Ek Aur Likh Rakhon;
Ke Main Jaanta Hoon,
Woh Kya Likhen Khate Jawaab Mein;

"Hmm..thanks! BTW, wo jawab tha ya sawal?"

Samajh Sako Toh Samajh Lo,
Warna Puchhunga Hua Kya Hai?

22/4/06 03:34  
Blogger Cruel Intentions said...

And Hey, I Want YOu To Check Out Mah Blog. Lemme Know When You Do So.

22/4/06 05:50  
Blogger Cruel Intentions said...

Humne Chanha Tha Tumhen Dil-o-Jaan Se E Ajnabi,
Thukra Diya Kyon Tumne Humen Ek Kaanta Samajh Kar?
Socha Tha Dilbar Ka Saath Naseeb Hoga,
Kya Pata Tha Yeh Phool Kisi Aur Ke Aangan Mein Khilega;
Chahte The Hum Tumhen, Aur Tum Kisi Gair Ko,
Khuda Aisa Gum Na De Kisi Aur Ko;
Ho Gaye The Tumhari Mohabbat Mein Paagal,
Na Jaante The Aag Thi Ek He taraf Lagi;
Samajh Sake Na Humari Mohabbat Ko Tum,
Maut Ko Bhi Humari Ek Haadsa Na Samajh Leena Tum;

Ek Yehi Sawaal Hai Jiska Jawaab Aaj Tak Dhoond Raha Hoon. ;-)

22/4/06 06:16  
Anonymous fakeer said...

bahut achha likha hai .
:)

24/4/06 08:04  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Zindagi bhi jaanam na jaane kyun aise hai khel khelti
Jo taqdeer mein na ho kyun hai usi ki taraf dhakelti
Sauda ye kaisa hai muhabbat ka gum se
Ek jhatke mein sab kuch chheen leta hai hum se

26/3/14 13:39  

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